Very creative story Hugo. I like how you have started to experiment with punctuation and using exclamation marks in your writing. Maybe next time you could try using commas to break up those long sentences? I wonder what happened to the Lord Mega Gargoyle? Do you think you will write another story about him and what happened to him after the castle was destroyed? - Brogan
Very creative story Hugo.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have started to experiment with punctuation and using exclamation marks in your writing. Maybe next time you could try using commas to break up those long sentences?
I wonder what happened to the Lord Mega Gargoyle? Do you think you will write another story about him and what happened to him after the castle was destroyed? - Brogan