Poetry

Friday, May 29, 2020

Positive, Thoughtful, Helpful blog comments

Kia ora whānau,

Today in our cyber safety lesson we are learning how to write a quality blog comment. We are learning how to write a comment that is; Positive, Thoughtful and Helpful to the blogs we are visiting. 

Below I have posted a piece of work that I would like the children to comment on. In the comments section they will be posting their own comment showing what they have learnt about a quality blog post. This post is designed to have mistakes and get the children thinking about how to help me in my learning journey and encourage me to keep trying. It is also designed to have the children highlight the things I did well and praise me on these things.  

A quality blog comment should start with the below;






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  +Ths is my writtting about my cat .   i did this on Monday.///







By Brogan