Today in our cyber safety lesson we are learning how to write a quality blog comment. We are learning how to write a comment that is; Positive, Thoughtful and Helpful to the blogs we are visiting.
Below I have posted a piece of work that I would like the children to comment on. In the comments section they will be posting their own comment showing what they have learnt about a quality blog post. This post is designed to have mistakes and get the children thinking about how to help me in my learning journey and encourage me to keep trying. It is also designed to have the children highlight the things I did well and praise me on these things.
A quality blog comment should start with the below;
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+Ths is my writtting about my cat . i did this on Monday.///
By Brogan
Hi, My name is Brogan.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you wrote about your cat. Your cat is cute. Do you know I have a cat. Next time you could keep your hand out of the photo and post only your first name.
From Brogan
Hi my name is Lucas.
ReplyDeleteYour cat is amazing
You should put your hand out of the way:)
Your cat is pretty cool and cute
Do you now my cats name
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Niko .i like your cat it is cute .Did you know i have a pet. to Next Time you cod take your hand out of the photo.haw meme pet Do you have?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Ben. l really like your post. Did you know i like cats? Next time dont put your finger in the photo. From Ben
ReplyDeleteHi Brogan, I like your drawing of the cat. Did you know I have a cat as well. Maybe next time only post your first name and colour in your picture. Why did you choose to write about your cat.
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Hi brogan. I love your drawing! Did you know that my favorite animal is a cat? Next time you could crop the photo
ReplyDeleteso only the paper is in it. Why did you choose to write about your cat?
From Travis
hi brogan
ReplyDeleteHey brogan that is a cool cat,did you know i have two cats as well,maybe you should not use your last name,what is your cats name? i would like to know it, Hugo
ReplyDeletehi hugo
Deletehi hugo
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Deletehi brogan i like your cat do you know i have two cats as well one of my cats names are tiger and rocket tiger is orange and rocket is grey rocket is older then then tiger rocket is around 36 tiger is around 3 but that is in human years from archie.
ReplyDeleteHi brogan I like your work. Your drawing of a cat is good. Did you know I have a cat.
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ReplyDeletelove the cat. did you know i have a cat. next time make the cat big. why the cat?????
ReplyDeletehi my name is Eliza I love your blog. did you know I have 2 cats. next time get it closer
ReplyDeletedid you now i have 2 cats they have blak frei and they have gnne eise
ReplyDeletehi brogan i like the drawing of your cat i have a cat to. Maybe next time you can not put your last name in why did you chose to write about your cat? From Samara
ReplyDeletehi Brogan the cat drawing is amazing !!! did you know a cat is one of my favorite animals. maybe next time don't need put your last name on it. what is your cats name ???
ReplyDeletehi brogan i have two cats as well ones a boy and ones a girl the boy is called charlie and the other one is caled smudge she is about 16 and he is 3
ReplyDeleteI like your work. Did you know I have two cats. One is a kitten and one is a big cat. Next time you I can help you draw a cat. From Kingston
ReplyDeleteHi Brogan maybe next time you could crop the chairs and you'r fingers oh and maybe you could crop you'r picture so we can read it but you'r cat was so good.
ReplyDeletecool cat brogan i love it i have a cat i have two cats
ReplyDeletehi brogan did you know that I have a cat. great job on the pic. maybe next time you could crop the pic . why did you choose to write about the cat.
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ReplyDeleteHI BROGAN
ReplyDeleteI love your cat.I have a cat to.do you have a dog.
hi
ReplyDeletehi brogan
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ReplyDeleteI like your cat. It is very call. next time you cold colour it in. I have a cat too.
ReplyDeletehi dragon
ReplyDeletei like lat you driw a cat
ReplyDeletehi brogan maybe next time you could crop the pic.
ReplyDeleteHi brogan i love your cat and i have a cat to but you are the best at that
ReplyDeleteHi brogen i have a cat to
ReplyDeletedid you now I have 1 cat and wet is your cat Look Like???
ReplyDeleteHi brogan I really like your cat I think it is really cute. Next time you could not put your last name in and you could crop it so you can see the picture better what is your cats name? by Zara
ReplyDeletecool cat Brogan i love it so so much i have two cats to
ReplyDeletewhat color is your cat brogan
ReplyDeletehi brogan i like your drawing of the cat it is cool and next time you could take a picture from up high.
ReplyDeleteHi Brogan. I like your cat drawing. Did you know I have a cat too his name is zippy. Next time you could crop the photo. What is your cats name?
ReplyDeleteWot color is your cat Brogan
ReplyDeletewhat is your cats name and what color
ReplyDeleteHi Brogan I love your work. I like cats, I have a dog and he is scared of cats. Next time you can post about your dog. From Harley
ReplyDeletehi brogan i Like your blog
ReplyDeleteHi Brogan I really like your cat. Did you know my cousin's have a cat to. Next time you could colour your cat in. How did you draw it? From Maeve.
ReplyDeletehi brogan dio you
ReplyDeletei haben a dog and i yel tal you my dog nem raks